Pitch response

I received some good comments from the pitch, I showed both versions of my site:
One with the tag and textured background
One without the tag and with a plain background.

I had mixed views on both and I had a suggestion to mix the tag and textured background with the content design of the one without. It was quite difficult to target multiple audiences of businesses, schools and students. The two I created had slightly different styling, one was more business orientated and the other was slightly more styled towards schools, so the mixture of the two should work quite well.